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Peaceful skies melt to black,
A sinner's evil has come back.

Clothed in the green of fields a hero rides.
On a mission that's do or die.

From a tranquil forest home he comes.
A blond haired youth with wild blue eyes,
And a sacred power locked inside.

His need will call man and beast,
Until the endless sin has ceased.
To find a temple hidden away,
To find the sword to light the way.

Save the princess.
Fight the fight.
Be our forever guiding light.
Mark the way.
Forge a path.
Let the darkness feel your rath.

Seal it away,
Forever and a day.
Until the day comes,
When the evil begins again.

Let your story be told,
To the kin of your kin,
You, the legend, that survived on the wind.
Okay, so I was watching Zelda videos on youtube when I came up with the idea for this poem. Most everyone knows there's only one thing better than Naruto for me, and that's The Legend of Zelda. I have almost every game ever created for the exception of four. My favorite game so far is the Twilight Princess, by far. The story line was great, and the graphics kicked ass. You don't even want to know how long I waited for that game. xD

Poetry (c) Me
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TriforceChampion Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Writer
I love TLoZ and writing and reading poems. Plus, I really liked this one, especially the last stanza. Adding this to favs!
xxwriter Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011
I love the rhythm of this poem. It almost sounds like a verse, short, yet straight to the point. The way you handled the first stanza was beautifully executed.
"Peaceful skies melt to black,
a sinner's evil has come back."

Captured me instantly.
And the most exciting thing is, I just now figured out how to search for written deviations based on specific works of art. Thus, I've been searching for pieces based on The Legend of Zelda, being the fan I am. And I have to say, this is certainly the lucky deviation to have captured my eye first. Although the consistency of the poem varies stanza by stanza, it will work for how it is laid out.

Very nice poem. This inspires me to do some of my own creative works!
youraniman Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2009
how do I submit stuff like this????
Zelda-in-disguise Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
Nice poem! Wasn't TP postponed for four years or something?
MysteriousCH Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2008
i only know that it was delayed twice while i was waiting for it.
i'unno about four years.
Zelda-in-disguise Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2008  Student Traditional Artist
All I know is that it was postponed for a long time. Someone said it was for 3-4 years. I remember around 2004 my brother heard about it on the internet and he said he was going to buy it for me for my birthday, but our stupid computer broke a month later and we didn't hear about it until we started subscribing to Nintendo Power about 3 years later ( the computer couldn't be fixed and my dad didn't buy a new computer until 2007 :( ). By that time, it was already released. Also, in case you're wondering why in the Wii version everything is flipped around, (a lot of people are wondering and I read it in NP I think) it's because if they made Link right-handed without flipping everythiing, it would have postponed the game LONGER and the people figured that everyone's waited WAY too long. I think it was the longest postponed game EVER.
animegurlorfantasy Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2008
gaarafangirls-ahhhhh gaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrraaaaaaaaaaa, we loooooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeee yyyyyyyyyoooooooooooooooouuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
me-stupid annoying fangirls *trips leader and then theay all start to fall down
gaara-sand coffin ,sand burial
ULOZFFC Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2007   Photographer
I love this!!!
MysteriousCH Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2007
Thank you. ^_^
mistfoxx Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2007
O_o wow you write good poetry.
So cool!^^
MysteriousCH Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2007
Thankies. ^_^<3
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